Monday, April 6, 2009

Chapter 9 - by Fabio Marchioro

Poh-Poh dies of pneumonia. Pardon my bluntness but not a moment too soon. She was, so far, just an acid, destructive presence in the book. She has no redeeming value but tending for Seek-Lung special needs.

On page 149 the jade peony makes its first real entrance. I think it should have been written capitalized.

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